Question

In 6th June I was going with class to trip in Gdańsk,Sopot,Gdynia. We were going at. 8:00 and we arrived at 12:00. When we was arriving we went to buy a memorabilia. Then We was going to taking a photo next to „Skwer Kościuszki”.Then At 14:30 We were going to Aquarium. I was seeing lot's of beautiful fishes and We were watching a film about Baltycke Sea. After that We was going to pizzeria and We ate pizza and drank some Cola. Then We was going to theater to show „Grease”. This performance was about „Rydel School” and the love Danny and Sandy. The show was really cool because I like musicals. The trip was clipping and I am sure I will go there again. Proszę o poprawienie błędów. Mój angielski jest na niskim poziomie . PILNE ! :>

Answer 1

to take zamiast to taking

lots zamiast lot's

popraw nazwę morza, poprawnie jest the Baltic Sea

 

clipping (?), lepiej zastąpić przymiotnikiem określającym wycieczkę, np. awesome, cool, groovy.

 

zaimek ''we'' pisze się małą literą.