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hej:D mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzic ten list? nie jestem dobra z angielskiego a muszę go oddac na ocene:) wiem że pewnie porobiłam głupie błędy dlatego będe wdzieczna jak mi ktos je poprawi:D błagam musze go oddac jutro!!! :Pz góry dzieki

Dear Annie

How are you? I’m writting to tell you I recently moved to a new house with my family. My new house is situated on suburbs. It’s conveniently located because is eassy access to public transport. This house is big and very nice. It’s big front garden ehere I often spedn my free time. There are big kitchen, living room, bathroom with bath and shower and roomy and cosy attic.

Last week ago I met my neighbour. They are very helpful because they helped us move in house. They are friendly and cheerful because they invited us to his house and they are always smiling

I’m in new school. It’s very nice. I don’t have ay problems with new teacher ad learnig. I mjet Jessica aho is kind and relaible. I think that she could my friend.

I hope uou’ll visit me o holiday. There’s going to club near my home. Think about it.

You best friend

XYZ

Answer 1

Trochę pozmieniałem:

 

Dear Annie

How are you? I’m writing to tell you I recently moved to a new house with my family. My new house is situated in the suburbs. It’s located quite conveniently because it provides easy access to public transport. This house is big and very nice. It has a big front garden where I often spend my free time. There is a big kitchen, a living room, a bathroom with a bath and a shower tub as well as a roomy and cosy attic.

 

Last week ago I met my neighbours. They were very helpful because they helped us move in the house. They are friendly and cheerful - they invited us to their house and they are always smiling. I’m in a new school. It’s very nice. I don’t have any problems either with new teachers or learning. I met Jessica who is kind and reliable. I think that she could be my friend. I hope you’ll visit me for the holiday. There’s is a club near my home. Think about it.

 

You best friend

XYZ

Answer 2

2 linijka: situated --> located, eassy --> easy

3 linijka: zamiast ' It's big front garden....' napisz elpiej 'We have a big garden in front of house, where I like to spend my free time.'

 

w drugiej części od samego początku: albo 'Last week...' albo 'About a week ago...' '...I have met my neighbourS.' bo chodzi chyba o sąsiadów, a nie jednego sąsiada.

w drugiej linijce: his --> their, are --> were

w czwartej linijce: any* and* 

w piątej: 'I have met Jessica who is kind and reliable.' i w następnym zdaniu wyrzuć 'that'

w szóstej: you* on*      i  'There is club near my house, where we can go when you will arrive.'

 

i podpis lepiej gdybyś napisała 'Kissses,' lub 'Love,' albo 'Hugs and kisses,'