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Hej! Możecie sprawdzić czy jest dobrze napisany e-mail o czynnościach domowych?

Jak coś to poprawcie błedy, potrzebuje na już! Hello Charlie, What's up? I'd like to tell you about my chores. Every day get up at 7.00 am then make the bed and eat breakfast. I go to the school at 7.40 am. Monday to Friday do homework. Sometimes mop the floor. On Saturday clean the house. Wash the dishes, vacuum the carpets, dust the furniture. Often take the rubbish out. My mother do the rest hausework : water the flowers, prepare a meal, iron clothes. My father rae leaves and mow the lawn. When done I go rest. I listen to music or watch movies. I go to bed at 23.00 o'clock in the evening. Charlie, maybe come on next Monday? Cordially invite! See you, XYZ.

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Jak coś to poprawcie błedy, potrzebuje na już! Hello Charlie, What's up? I'd like to tell you about my chores. Every day I get up at 7.00 am then I make the bed and eat breakfast. I go to the school at 7.40 am. FROM Monday to Friday I do homework. Sometimes I mop the floor. On Saturday I clean the house-Wash the dishes, vacuum the carpets, dust the furniture. I Often take the rubbish out. My mother doES the rest hausework : waterS the flowers, prepareS a meal, ironS clothes. My father rae (??? n ie ma takiego słowka) leaves and mows the lawn. When I FINISH I go rest. I listen to music or watch movies. I go to bed at 23.00 o'clock in the evening. Charlie, maybe come on next Monday? Cordially invite! See you, XYZ.