Hej mam wielka prośbe potrzeba miu tylko sprawdzić czy dobrze napisałam zadanie jeśli bd jakieś błędy prosze aby je poprawić. Czekam do 19:30
Hi.....! How are you ?
I'm on the French Alps with my class for the one week.I and my friends, we learning to ski with an instructor called Sylvia. Yesterday evening I was skiing down of a mountain while fell off. I fell off on snow. As soon as Sylvie saw me she came to rescue me. I was lucky he was very near the me while accident happened. While Sylvia was helping I break my new sunglasses. After I was going to caffe to felt better because be upset about me sunglasses.
See you soon....!
Czekam ! ;d
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Zdaje mi się że nie powinno byś "I and my friends" tylko samo "We learning..." :)
1)I'm IN the......
2) for the one week- bez the
3) I and my friends- ME and my friends we ARE learning HOW to ski
4) while I fell off ON SNOW- bez kropki, po co powtarzać
5)very near the me- bez the, i to very brzmi bardzo dziwnie
Ostatnie dwa zadanie- źle. Kiedy Sylwia pomagała to złamałam okulary?
Powinno być np. tak; While Sylwia was helping me I broke my new sunglasses. After that I went to cafe to feel better, because I was still upset about my sunglasses.
Coś w tym stylu.