Hej czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić mi czy e-mail został dobrze napisany? Ewentualne błędy poprawić?
I would like to tell you today about the Festival, "Young Talent" where I had the opportunity to be a couple of weeks ago. Young people there, danced, sang and presented different layouts gym. It was amazing. Despite the many exciting events, the most liked a little girl at the age of 8 years, with an angelic voice who sang a song Whitney Houston - I Will Always Love You. She was very pretty. Anna on all kinds of festivals never met a corner for those with an artistic soul, for those who paint with different techniques, sometimes very interesting. Maybe when you put your festival program also this event?
In a few weeks in our city will be another edition of the festival "Young Talents". Recently I've noticed that a lot of singing. if so you might like to go with me on it and take part in it?
I would like to tell you today about the Festival, "Young Talent" where I had the opportunity to be a couple of weeks ago. Young people there, danced, sang and presented different layouts gym. It was amazing. Despite the many exciting events, the most liked a little girl at the age of 8 years, with an angelic voice who sang a song Whitney Houston - I Will Always Love You. She was very pretty. Anna on all kinds of festivals never met a corner for those with an artistic soul, for those who paint with different techniques, sometimes very interesting. Maybe when you put your festival program also this event?
In a few weeks in our city will be another edition of the festival "Young Talents". Recently I've noticed that a lot of singing. if so you might like to go with me on it and take part in it?
Eli5500
Według mnie jest bardzo dobrze napisany ;) tylko bym zmienił to an angelic na jakieś inne słowo, ale tak to ok.
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seagirl
Spoko tekst, wszystko poprawnie. :)
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