Question

—GRAMMAR ERROR—
Hello everyone, my name is Evelyn. You can call me Eve. I was born in March 13th 2004. I'm the first child from three siblings. I graduate of SMANSA Lampung.
Now, I'll talk about my family. I have my parents and two siblings. My father is an employee at SMANSA Lampung. My mother is a nurse. I have one little sister and one little brother. My sister's name is Shasa. She is in twelveth grade right now. My brother's name is Willy, he is an elementary school student.

— Perbaiki setiap penggunaan grammar yg kurang tepat

Answer 1

**—GRAMMAR ERROR—**

Hello everyone, my name is Evelyn. You can call me Eve. I was born on March 13th, 2004. I'm the first child among three siblings. I graduated from SMANSA Lampung.

Now, let me tell you about my family. I have my parents and two siblings. My father is an employee at SMANSA Lampung, and my mother is a nurse. I have one little sister and one little brother. My sister's name is Shasa. She is in twelfth grade right now. My brother's name is Willy, and he is an elementary school student.

**Explanation:** In the corrected version, the following changes were made:

- Added "on" before "March 13th, 2004" to make the date grammatically correct.

- Changed "graduate of" to "graduated from" to properly indicate completion of studies.

- Corrected "of" to "among" to convey the correct position among siblings.

- Added a comma after "SMANSA Lampung" to improve sentence structure.

- Clarified "twelveth" to "twelfth" for the correct spelling.

- Added "and" before "he is an elementary school student" to enhance the sentence's flow and clarity.