Czy ktoś może zobaczyc czy liest jest poprawnie napisany? Tylko proszę, aby sprawdził to ktoś, kto naprawdę jest w tym dobry :)) Z góry dziękuję.
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Yesterday I was in Buckingham Palace. It was the first time I have been in London. I have never been there before. I don’t regret! It’s really interesting/fascinating place. I haven’t met Queen Elisabeth II but I had great time in the palace. The trip around the Buckingham Palace took us one and half an hour. After our visit to the palace we went to the London Eye. I haven’t seen the panorama of the all the city from such high structure. Everyday I want more and more visiting interesting places and sightseeing London! Unfortunately I’m leaving after tomorrow. However there are also good news ! I’m seeing you at the cinema on Sunday!
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Hi!
Yesterday I was in Buckingham Palace. It was the first time I have been in London. I have never been there before. I don’t regret! It’s really interesting/fascinating place. I haven’t met Queen Elisabeth II but I had great time in the palace. The trip around the Buckingham Palace took us one and half an hour. After our visit to the palace we went to the London Eye. I haven’t seen the panorama of the all the city from such high structure. Everyday I want more and more visiting interesting places and sightseeing London! Unfortunately I’m leaving after tomorrow. However there are also good news ! I’m seeing you at the cinema on Sunday!
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Hmmm niby nie jest źle , ale wypadałoby się trzymać czasów... Raz piszesz "have " a za drugim razem piszesz had...Aczkolwiek sądzę że jest to dobra praca i z powodzeniem możesz liczyć na 4/5
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