Question

Czy to jest dobrze napisane ??? (jak źle to poprawcie błędy plissss)

Dear Mum,

We're having a great holiday. On the first day, we went the sea and we sailing. On the second day, we went on a bus jurney to a very big museum. It was very good! On the way back, we stopped in a museum with dinosaurs and I went sightseeing. Yesterday, it was very hot and windy and we went to a restaurant. Last night, I went to a shop and boat a surfboard. This morning we went lake and I surfed. It was fantastic!

Kamil

Answer 1

Dear Mum. 

We are spending amazing time here. On the first day we were sailing and swimming in the sea. The next day we were on the bus trip. We were visiting very interesting museum. There were huge dinosaurs' skeletons. I was delighted! Yesterday it was very hot outside but we ate dinner in the restaurantm, after meal we went shoping. I bought myself a surfboard! Todey I tried swimming on it and I was really good.

 

Love, Kamil