Czy te zdania są prawidłowo złożone ? IMPORTANT Hello colleagues, Soon, our school will be a concert in support of foundations dedicated to the conservation of the environment. The event will play the winner of the "Idol", namely Sam Smith. It is really good! Money from the concert will be used to plant new trees. The concert will be held on April 11 and the price of the ticket is only 8 dollars. Entertainment will also wheel of fortune, At the concert will be really cool !!
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IMPORTANT Hello colleagues, Soon in our school THERE will be ORGANISED a concert TO support CHARITABLE foundations / TRUSTS dedicated to the PRESERVATION of the environment. DURING THIS event the winner of the ( first / second edition?) (American / Polish ?) "Idol" Sam Smith will APPEAR AND SING ON STAGE. THAT'S FANTASTIC! THE money COLLECTED DURING the concert will be used to plant new trees. The concert will be held on April 11 and the price of A ticket is only 8 dollars. AMONG OTHER ATTRACTIONS THERE WILL ALSO BE "WHEEL OF FORTUNE" THE CONCERT WILL BE A REALLY COOL EVENT.
Hello colleagues,
Soon in our school THERE will be ORGANISED a concert TO support CHARITABLE foundations / TRUSTS dedicated to the PRESERVATION of the environment.
DURING THIS event the winner of the ( first / second edition?) (American / Polish ?) "Idol" Sam Smith will APPEAR AND SING ON STAGE. THAT'S FANTASTIC! THE money COLLECTED DURING the concert will be used to plant new trees.
The concert will be held on April 11 and the price of A ticket is only 8 dollars.
AMONG OTHER ATTRACTIONS THERE WILL ALSO BE "WHEEL OF FORTUNE"
THE CONCERT WILL BE A REALLY COOL EVENT.
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