Czy prawidłowo napisany jest ten tekst? Proszę w razie konieczności o poprawę. Dear Justin! How are you? How's your health? I am writing to you because now I live in England. I attend a language course here. You are the only person who can save me in this great city. A friend with of the language course will be celebrating her 19 birthday and I would be very pleased if you helped me choose the gift. She's a bookworm, so I would like to buy her book or buy CD favourite band because she loves music, especially rock and sharp sound. Nothing special, but from the heart. I would also like to ask for advice, where do you recommend the best place to go shopping. As I wrote, I'm lost here in England, and your help would be important to me. I would buy gift after school on Tuesday at 15:00. What do you think? We have a lot to tell, especially since we saw you long ago. I missed you a very and I can not wait to until you hug. I'm waiting for a reply, Kiss, XYZ
I'm writing to you, because I live in England now.
the language course
zamiast great - huge, enormous, large
My friend from the language course will be
tryb warunkowy: 1 zamiast 2, ponieważ sytuacja, o której piszesz jest prawdopodobna i może się wydarzyć, więc: I will be very pleased if you help me
buy her a book or a CD (nie trzeba powtarzać dwa razy 'buy')
CD of her favourite band
sharp sounds
ask for advice: can you recommend me the best place to go...
i'm lost here (bez England, wspominałaś o tym wcześniej)
zamiast to tell - to discuss
especially I've not seen you for ages, zamiast since we caw you long ago
zamiast a very - very much
untill I'll hug you