Czy mógłby mi ktos sprawdzić to opowiadanie i poprawić błędy?
Miałam w nim zastosowac czas Past Simple i Past Countinuous.
Jest to skrócona forma opowiadania Lost in the desert.
Last month Rick Anderson, a magazine photographer flew over the Sahara desert in the small plane. He was taking photos when there was bang and something happened with the engine and the plane began to fell.Frank a pilot safely landed in the desert.Next they checked the radio, but it wasn't working.Rick decided to go for help, though frank tried to stop him. It was very hot.He didn't have any water in the bottle. He wanted to go back but he saw pople on camel who were waving to him.
He couldn't to wave back becouse he fainted. When Rick opened his eyes he was inside a tent. Frank was there too. Bedouins rescued them.
LastmonthRickAnderson,amagazinephotographerFlewoverthe Saharadesertin the smallplane.WhenHe WasTakingpicturesThere WasSomething HappenedandbangwiththeengineandtheplaneBeganapilottofell.FrankSafelylandedinthedesert.NextTHEYcheckedtheradio,It Was notintendedworking.RickDecidedto gofor help,TriedtostopthoughfrankHIM.It was veryhot.HeDid notHaveAnywaterin the bottle.Hewantedto go backonegoalETpoplesawcamelWhoWerewavingtoHIM.
HeCould notwavebacktobecouseETFainted.RickOpenedHis EyesWhenHe Wasinsideatent.FrankWas Theretoo.Bedouinsrescuedem.