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Czy mógłby ktoś to sprawdzić czy gramatycznie jest dobrze i co można zmienić, żeby lepiej brzmiało.

Hi Ann,

I am writing you from Paris ! This city is wonderfull! The weather is nice. All the time the sun is shining and it isabove 35degreesCelsius. There is a lot of monuments or interesting things, which are really worth seeing. One of them is the Eiffle Tower. This is the largest tower around the world. But if you have afear of heightsis better not toenterto the top. There is alsooneof the most famousmuseums in the world, the Louvre.You will findsuch imagesas the'MonaLisa' and 'Liberty Leading the Peoplebarricades'. Notre-Dame de Paris is one of themost popular sightsof Paris.Oneof the most famouscathedralsin the world, including through thenovel,The Hunchback ofNotreDameby Victor Hugo,French writer. You must see this place !

Love, ...

Answer 1

1."wonderfull" -> "wonderful"

2."monuments or interesting things" -> "monuments and interesting things"

3."around the world" -> "in the world"

4." is better not to enter to the top" -> "is better to not enter to the top"

5."But if you have a fear of heights" -> "But if you are afraid of heights" 

(zaraz jeszcze poczytam to parę razy i może coś się jeszcze znajdzie) 

PS: nie robi się spacji przed znakami interpunkcyjnymi.

Answer 2

Hi Ann,

I am writing to you from Paris ! This city is wonderful! The weather is nice. The sun is shining  all the time and it is above 35 degrees Celsius. There are a lot of monuments and interesting things which are really worth seeing. One of them is the Eiffel Tower. This is the largest tower in the world. But if you have a fear of heights it is better not to enter the top. There is also one of the most famous museums in the world, the Louvre.You will find such images as the 'Mona Lisa' and the 'Liberty Leading the People barricades'. Notre-Dame de Paris is one of the most popular sights of Paris. One of the most famous cathedrals in the world, including the novel, The Hunchback of Notre Dame by Victor Hugo, a French writer. You must see this place !



Love, ...

 

 

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