Czy może ktoś sprawdzić, czy to jest napisane poprawnie gramatycznie?
Three children were going to a birthday party but they didn't foresee that storm could break up and turned over their boat. Happily, they all could swim well so they decided to swim to a rock which was a bit far from they.
Then they stayed on the rock for three days. They had no water to drink, but luckily they found oysters which they could eat.
On the rock was too hot and they couldn't stay there. They decided to swim to island that they saw. They thought that on the island were coconuts with milk inside.
It was hard to get there. They had to swim all day, but finally they got to the tiny island with coconut trees. They drank milk.
But there was still a problem with sun, because they couldn't get away from it.
Days were passing. Children got sunburnt and dehydrated.
Luckily, they father found them.
It was miracle that they were still alive.
Three children were going to a birthday party but they didn't foresee that storm could break up and turned over their boat. Happily, they all could swim well so they decided to swim to a rock which was a bit far from they.
Then they stayed on the rock for three days. They had no water to drink, but luckily they found oysters which they could eat.
On the rock was too hot and they couldn't stay there. They decided to swim to island that they saw. They thought that on the island were coconuts with milk inside.
It was hard to get there. They had to swim all day, but finally they got to the tiny island with coconut trees. They drank milk.
But there was still a problem with sun, because they couldn't get away from it.
Days were passing. Children got sunburnt and dehydrated.
Luckily, they father found them.
It was miracle that they were still alive.
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Czytając nie zauważyłam żadnych błędów gramatycznych ;) Jest poprawnie napisane. Mam nadzieję że dostaniesz 5 !
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