Question

Czy może ktoś sprawdzić czy mam to dobrze napisane ?
i czy nie ma błędów ? a jak są to je poprawić :) I ułożyć to w całość
ładnie :) daje naj :)
On my normal schoolday I wake up at 6
am. After that Ii go take shower and brush my teeth. In the meantime my
father makes brekfast for us. When I'm done I get dressed, next I'm go
to the kitchen and I eat sandwich.
At seven o clock I leave for school. I have got six sometimes seven lessons.
I've training after school and I come home after five pm.
When I get home I do my homework and listen to music.
At
six pm I eat dinner and in the meantime I chat on the Internet with my
friends, after that I take a long shower, when I'm done I'm going to bed
to sleep.

I czy może ktoś napisać ( nie z tłumacza ) Przeznaczam
około dwie godziny na naukę, a kiedy skończę odpoczywam i oglądam filmy
na laptopie.Oczywiście wieczorem czeka mnie spacer z psem :)

Answer 1

On my normal schoolday I wake up at 6 
am. After that I take shower and I brush my teeth. In the meantime my 
father makes brekfast for us. When I'm done I get dressed, next I'm go 
to the kitchen and I eat sandwich.
At seven o clock I go to school. I have got six or seven lessons.
I've training after school and I come home after five pm.
When I get home I do my homework and I listen to music.
At
six pm I eat dinner and in the meantime I chat on the Internet with my 
friends, after that I take a long shower, when I'm done I'm going to sleep.
I learn about two hours, when I finish I relax and I watch films on my laptop. 
Of course, in the evening I will walking with my lovely dog :D