Question

Czy mam dobrze napisane zaproszenie?

I would invite summer school participants on inauguration engagements in the next year. It will be held on Monday 23 October at 9.00 o'clock in the morning at old school. Mr. Stone will give a lecture. On this party will be many artists for exemple ; Jenifer Lopez, John Lenon. After the ceremony I invite to lamp champagne.

Hope to see you there.

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Answer 1

Jest ok, może być

Answer 2

I would like to invite participants of summer school at the inaugural commitment next year. It will be held on Monday 23 October at 9.00 am in the old school. Mr. Stone will give a lecture. At this event there will be many artists, for example, Jennifer Lopez, John Lennon. After the ceremony, I invite you to a glass of champagne.

See you