Cześć. Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić czy ten tekst został dobrze przetłumaczony? ( czasy przeszłe, the, a, itp) Jak są jakieś błędy to bardzo proszę o poprawkę. :)
Po polsku: To był słoneczny i bezchmurny dzień. Przygotowywałam się do wizyty rodziny. Kiedy sprzątałam w domu znalazłam kupon lotto. Szybko sprawdziłam w internecie i okazało się, że wygrałam ! Nie mogłam uwieżyć własnym oczom, a uśmiech nie zchodził z mojej twarzy. W tym momencie moja ciocia Monika i kuzyn Artur weszli do mojego domu. Natychmiast opowiedziałam im o mojej wygranej. Byli zaskoczeni podobnie jak ja! Kiedy trochę ochłonęłam zadzwoniłam do odpowiednich osób i już po godzinie otrzymałam pieniądze. Od razu poszliśmy do pobliskiego centrum handlowego. To było szaleństwo! Wydałam dużą część swojej wygranej. Kupiłyśmy dużo ubrań, a mój mały kuzyn – Artur dostał parę nowych zabawek. Na koniec poszliśmy do eleganckiej restauracji na kolację. Potem wróciliśmy do domu. Wciąż nie mogę uwieżyć w to co się stało. Ten dzień był wspaniały. Nigdy go nie zapomnę! Po angielsku: That was a sunny and cloudless day. I was got ready to visit my family. While I was cleaning my home I found a playslip. I was quickly check out this in web and it appeared thad I won! I can't believed my eyes and smile can't get down of my face. In the meantime my uncle Monica and my cousin Arthur entered into my home. Immentiadely I was told them about my win. They were suprised like me! When I was a little bit compose oneself I rang to right people and after hour I received my money. At once we were going to nearby shopping mall. That was a crainess! I was spend a lot of my winner. We were bought much new clothes, and my little cousin get some new toys. In the end we were going to elegant restaurant for dinner. After that we were getting back home. I still can't believed what's happened. This day was awesome. I will never forget that !
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mist0That was a sunny and cloudless day. - It was a sunny and cloudless day. I was quickly check out this in web and it appeared thad I won! - I checked it quickly out this on the Internet and it appeared that I won! I can't believed my eyes and smile can't get down of my face. - I couldn't believe and my smile couldn't get down of my face. I was told them about my win.- I told them about my win. When I was a little bit compose oneself - When I was a little bit composed I rang to right people and after hour I received my money. - I rang to the right people and after an hour I recived my money. we were going to nearby shopping mall. - we were going to a nearby shopping mall. That was a crainess! - That was craziness! I was spend a lot of my winner. - I spent a lot of my won money. We were bought much new clothes and my little cousin get some new toys. - We bought many new clothes and my little cousin got some new toys. In the end we were going to elegant restaurant for dinner - At the end we went to an elegant restaurant for dinner. After that we were getting back home. - After that we returned home. I still can't believed what's happened. -I still can't believe what has happened.
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liberalpussythad - that my little cousin get some new toys - got
I was quickly check out this in web and it appeared thad I won! -
I checked it quickly out this on the Internet and it appeared that I won!
I can't believed my eyes and smile can't get down of my face. - I couldn't believe and my smile couldn't get down of my face.
I was told them about my win.- I told them about my win.
When I was a little bit compose oneself - When I was a little bit composed
I rang to right people and after hour I received my money. - I rang to the right people and after an hour I recived my money.
we were going to nearby shopping mall. - we were going to a nearby shopping mall.
That was a crainess! - That was craziness!
I was spend a lot of my winner. - I spent a lot of my won money.
We were bought much new clothes and my little cousin get some new toys. - We bought many new clothes and my little cousin got some new toys.
In the end we were going to elegant restaurant for dinner -
At the end we went to an elegant restaurant for dinner.
After that we were getting back home. - After that we returned home.
I still can't believed what's happened. - I still can't believe what has happened.
my little cousin get some new toys - got