Czas: Past Continuous, Past Simple.
WRITING a surviovor's story.
WRITING PLAN:
Paragraph 1: Before the incident
Last Sunday I was ...
Paragraph 2: Description of the incident
Suddenly, ...
Paragraph 3: After the incident
Afterwards ...
Proszę, zamiast krótkich zdań typu: I was frightened., zdanie dłuższe (alte też z sensem). Opowiadanie ma byc max. do 15 zdań (gdy używaszdłuższych zdań). Liczę na ciekawe opowiadanie, bez błędów.
DAJĘ NAJ!!!
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Paragraph 1: Before the incident
Last Sunday I was cycling through the woods. I was going very fast but minding the rough terrain and low hanging tree branches. I was enjoying the wind on my face and listening to birds singing all around me. It seemed to be a perfect day.
Paragraph 2: Description of the incident
Suddenly, I heard a scream from the woods, somewhere to my left. I instinctively turned my head to the left to see whom the scream was coming from. It was a mistake because I failed to notice an especially sturdy, low hanging branch just in front of me. I hit the branch with my forehead at full speed. The impact was so powerful that the branch broke. However, I was swept away from the bike and I hit the ground like a bag of stones. Everything went black. I think I fell unconscious. The very next thing I felt was a warm touch on my face. I opened my eyes but my vision was still somewhat blurry. I was looking at that fuzzy and blurred face above me. When my eyes finally adjusted to the light that blurred face became the face of a young woman, leaning over me. She looked worried. But when she saw me open my eyes the smile shone on her face.
Paragraph 3: After the incident
Afterwards, when I able to get up I checked that the only thing that impact left was a huge bruise on my forehead. The woman, Anna, explained that she was screaming because she wanted to warn me about this huge tree branch just ahead. Well, apparently it didn't work. But the bruise was soon gone and Anna became my dear friend. So it wasn't that bad after all, you see.