Byłabym wdzięczna, gdyby ktoś dobry z angielskiego mógłby to sprawdzić.
Proszę o poprawienie błędów:)
12 Westfield Drive
Bromley BR13 6TF
2st Januar 2012
Dear Max,
How are you ? I hope you are well. Thank you for a gift. You remembered. I relish very. You was to birthdays. Shame. You stint !
A laptop is super gift's. I use its every day. I dreamed about ere. I don't need already. I have a Internet. I search much informations. I listen music. I talk of friend and family. I learnt. A laptop is pretty, big, green and commodious-well.
Fast friend celebrates also. She was were my family. Clown was. Aunt Ala lit candies onto the cake. I blew out alt the candles. I had a wish. A party was were to an hour 24:00.
I have other gifts. I got: a brooch, a nice perfume, a book, a blouse and a money.
Bye for now
Małgosia
PS I greet you. I love you :)
dobrze napisałaś ten list i nie ma w nim błędów dobra robota ;)
Dear Max,
How are you ? I hope you are well. Thank you for a gift. You remembered. Thank you very much for this. I know you coudn't be on my birthday.
A laptop is a super gift. I use it every day. I dreamed about it. Now I don't need to dream, because i've got it. I have a Internet, too. I search much informations. I listen to music. I talk with my friends and family. I learn. A laptop is pretty, big, green and commodious-well.(aczkolwiek to ostatnie słowo jakoś pozostaje poza znanymi mi słownikami)
Almost all of my friends celebrated with me. There was my family, too. and a Clown. Aunt Ala lit candies onto the cake. I blew out alt the candles. I had a wish, but i don't tell you what i wished for. A party was to midnight.
I had other gifts. I got: a brooch, a nice perfume, a book, a blouse and a money.
Bye for now
Małgosia
PS I greet you. I love you :)
Nawet to pozostawia trochę do życzenia. Translator google nie nadaje sie do prac domowych, odpusć go sobie nastepnym razem. Prawie połowy nie mogłam zrozumiem, co autor miał na myśli i chciał przekazać. Dlatego też nadpisałam to co było totalnie niepojęte.