Question

Bardzo serdenie proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy i ewentualne poprawienie błędów. Z góry bardzo dziękuję.

A miałam napisac o wadach i zaletach zdrowego i niezdrowego jedzenia.

Healthy food like fruit or vegetables contain lots of vitamins and minerals. Here are lots of types of healthy food so our diet can be various and we won't be bored by what we eat. Disadvantages of this kind of food are principles which we have to comply with if we want that our died would be really healthy. SOme of us prefer junk food. They eat when they want and they don't think is it good for them. I believe that most of us know that it's not good idea to only eat fast food. It wold be delicious and some of people love that. Disadvanteges of junk food is a big amount of fat and minerals.

But we have got only one life and sometimes we can eat something unhealthy.

Answer 1

Healthy food, like fruit or vegetables, containS a lot of vitamins and minerals. There are many types of healthy food so that we can eat different things every day and not get bored. A disadvantage of this kind of food is that there are rules we have to obey in order to eat healthy and deliver everything our body needs. Some people prefer junk food. They eat it when they want and they don't think is it good for them. (nie rozumiem zdania, jedza kiedy chca i mysla, ze to dla nich szkodliwe? a moze nie wiedza, ze to jest niezdrowe?) I believe that most of us know that it's not good to only eat fast food. That would be fantastic (jedzenie moze byc delicious, sytuacja nie)(i znow powinnas sprecyzowac, co jest takie dobre i co ludzie kochaja?)and some of people love that. A disadvanteges of junk food is that it contains a big amount of fat and minerals. (mineralow chyba nie zawiera, skoro jest szkodliwe? zamiast tego moglabys napisac carbohydrates - weglowodany)

But we only live once and sometimes we are allowed to eat unhealthy food.