Question

Artikan ke b.ing yaa tapi past tense
tahun lalu kami anggota marching band diundang undang mengahdairi acara 17 agustusan. kami diundang karena kami sempat mendapat juara 1 di gpmb 2013. kami terus berlatih dari pagi samapi malam. kami berlatih setiap hari selasa, kamis, dan sabtu. kami juga sering TC(training center). pada TC pertama kami kedatangan tamu dari jakarta. yang datang itu chika jessica dan omesh. mereka datang sambil memeriahkan acara City of Light. kami juga harus tutorial setiap pagi kalau lagi TC. kami juga harus tutor pada saat libur kenaikan kelas.
kami harus rela terkena hujan atau panas panasan. kami juga harus rela menerima teguran dari pelatih dan senior kami, walau seperti marah.
kami berangkat pada tanggal 12 agustus, kami disuruh istirahat setelah sampai.
besoknya, kami latihan di stadion lebak bulus. kami berlatih dari pagi sampai malam juga.
kami pulanh jam 12 malam.
kami terus berlatih demi kematangan paket kami.kami juga harus berlatih di istana negara. terkadang di istana negara susah untuk latihan. kami bisa latihan di istana hanya sebentar seperti 20 menit saja.
pada tanggal 17 agustus kami menampilkan paket kami. kami menikmati lagu tersebut, penonton juga terpukau melihat kami.
ternyata perjuangan kami selama ini tidak berujung sia sia. kami dapat menampilkan paket kami baik.

Answer 1

Ini menurutku ya..

Last year, our marching band members are invited to attend the August 17 event. We were invited because we had received 1st place in GPMB 2013. We continued to practice from the morning till night. We had practice every Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday. We also often to TC (Training Center). On our first TC we have guests from Jakarta. Namely Chika Jessica and Omesh. They come at once enliven the City of Light. We also need a tutorial every morning when we're TC. We also had to tutor during a holidays grade.

We must be willing to exposed to rain or heat. We also must be willing to accept a reprimand from the coaches and our seniors, although like to be angry.

We set off at the 12th August, we were told to rest after arriving. Next day, we had practice at Lebak Bulus Stadium. Our practice from the morning till night as well. We returned at 12 am

We continued to practice for the sake of maturity of us. We also had to practice in the state palace. Sometimes felt so difficult to practicing at there. We can exercise in the palace only briefly as 20 minutes.

On 17th August, we shows our package. We enjoyed the song, the audience was also amazed to see us. Turns over the years, our struggle is not in vain. We can show our package well

Answer 2

Kalo saya:
Last year we invited members of the marching band mengahdairi law August 17 event. we were invited because we had received 1st place in 2013. GPMB we continue to practice from morning till night. we practice every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday. we also often TC (training center). on our first TC guests from Jakarta. who came was chika jessica and Omesh. they come while enliven the City of Light. we also need a tutorial every morning if another TC. we also had to tutor during holidays grade.we must be willing to be exposed to rain or heat panasan. we also must be willing to accept a reprimand from the coaches and our seniors, although like angry.we set off on the 12th of August, we were told to rest after arriving.the next day, we practice at Lebak Bulus Stadium. Our practice from morning till night as well.Our pulanh 12 o'clock at night.we continue to practice for the sake of maturity package us.We also have to practice in the state palace. sometimes difficult to exercise the state palace. we can exercise in the palace only briefly as 20 minutes.on August 17, we show our package. we enjoyed the song, the audience was also amazed to see us.This turns our struggle for endless futile. we can show us a good package.