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this is story about my friend anna and anton, Its happaned like two years ago. anna told me a little story about their story. she loves someone, but his crush just pretend like he don't know about she's felt. before it happaned wherever they went they are always together and after she's said she loves him she felt like dissapointed since she's said she love him, however after that situation just normally back she keep be friend with him otherwise to him. while she was just asked why he don't want to her boyfriend his just said I have different felt to someone that I wanted .after 2 weeks later and day to day she has better felt although I know obvious she's felt even though she's saw he's wih someone. then since that moment as soon as she was fine she can forget about the problems and wasted time with listened to music sad everyday.
michelethirteen
Gue bantu ya maaf kalo mungkin kagak pas :3 this is story about my friend anna and anton, Its happaned like two years ago. anna told me a little story about their story (mungkin ini her story). she loves someone, but her crush just pretend like he don't know about what she feel. before it happaned wherever they went they are always together and after she said she loves him she felt dissapointed since she said she love him, however after that situation just normally back she keep be friend with him otherwise to him. while she was just asked why he don't want to be her boyfriend he just said I have different felt to someone that I wanted .after 2 weeks later and day to day she has better felt although I know obvious she felt even though she saw he's wih someone. then since that moment as soon as she was fine she can forget about the problems and wasted time with listened to sad or romantic music everyday.
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rahmahChan
This is the story about my friend. they are anna and anton. it happened two years ago. anna told me of her story. she loves someone, but someone whom she loves pretend not to know about her feeling. before it happened, wherever they went, they were always together. however, after she said about her feeling, he changed his characteristics. anna felt disappointed because she has said that she loves him. few days later, the situation is back normally. she keeps her friendship with anton, anna ask to anton why he did not want to be her boyfriend,, he said that he has someone whom he likes. after 2 weeks later. anna feels better. sometimes, she feels jealous if she see anton with his girlfriend. then, at that time she can forget about the problems and move on by listening sad music everyday
this is story about my friend anna and anton, Its happaned like two years ago. anna told me a little story about their story (mungkin ini her story). she loves someone, but her crush just pretend like he don't know about what she feel. before it happaned wherever they went they are always together and after she said she loves him she felt dissapointed since she said she love him, however after that situation just normally back she keep be friend with him otherwise to him. while she was just asked why he don't want to be her boyfriend he just said I have different felt to someone that I wanted .after 2 weeks later and day to day she has better felt although I know obvious she felt even though she saw he's wih someone. then since that moment as soon as she was fine she can forget about the problems and wasted time with listened to sad or romantic music everyday.
few days later, the situation is back normally. she keeps her friendship with anton, anna ask to anton why he did not want to be her boyfriend,, he said that he has someone whom he likes.
after 2 weeks later. anna feels better. sometimes, she feels jealous if she see anton with his girlfriend.
then, at that time she can forget about the problems and move on by listening sad music everyday