Question

Ada yang bisa koreksi dan benerin grammer saya dicerita ini ?

formal education for the time being it is not enough because not all the students are excited to follow the way of learning this way. come to school every day and follow all the rules and learning at school could have an impact saturated with students in part because the real learning does not have to go to school and follow all the rules that apply in school. but in his own way and changing the way we think ourselves can be learned from that taught in school. follow school lessons will not make all students in the country is advancing, good or bad in terms of the quality of students not we follow the lessons at school but most good quality which in fact is in the willingness of ourselves

Answer 1

Formal education for the time being is not enough because not all of the students are excited to follow this way of learning; go to school everyday, follow all the rules and learning at school could have an impact saturated for students in part because the real learning way doesn't have to go to school and follow all the school rules, but in their own ways and changing the way they think of themselves can be learned from the lesson in school. Follow the school lessons won't make all students in the country be improved, good or bad terms of the students' qualities but the willingness of ourselves is the best quality.

Answer 2

Formal education for the time being is not enough because not all the students are excited to follow this way of learning. Going to school every day, following the rules, and learning at school only have an impact saturated with the students partially because the real learning process is not going to school and following all the rules that apply at school, but we can learn by changing the way we think ourselves. Following school lessons will not make all the students advanced. Good or bad in terms of the quality of the students is not valued by following the lessons at school; in fact, the best quality is their willingness.