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Hi Bella,

I want to invite u for my birthday's party. It will held in my house on the street Kopernika 16/40, the day of the party is 24.10.2011 at 15 to 19.

To this party also come my friends from the class. There will a lot of different games. We'll make a dance show and we go to the cinema.

When I made my birthday's party one year ago, there was a fireworks display, we ate pizza and we had a lots of fun!

I hope, that u accept my invitation.

Hugs, Marry.

Answer 1

Hi Bella, 

I want to invite u to my birthday party. It will be held in my house at 16/40 Kopernika Street, on  24.10.2011 at 18.45.

My friends from school will also come to this party. There will be a lot of different games. We'll make a dance show and go to the cinema.

When I had my birthday party one year ago, there was a fireworks display, we ate pizza and we had a lot of fun! 

I hope, that u accept my invitation. 

                                                                Hugs, Marry.