In the picture there are 5 American football players and two other people. Two people, probably medics, are assisting one of the players who is lying on the FIELD. The rest of the players took a knee as a courtesy gesture. (?? - THIS MAKES NO SENSE) The whole situation takes place on a sports field during a game of American football.(DELETE DUE TO REPETITION)If the PLAYER IS SERIOUSLY INJURED, he MAY not play in THE next couple of games.
1. REWORDED > If the injury is serious, he will be taken to the hospital. The player will probably have to be taken to the hospital in an ambulance, if he cannot continue playing and the injury is serious.
2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because big tournaments can last for over 4 ours. it is a case in big tournaments that some games last over 4 hours. However, rarely, do games last that long. It is a rare thing in sport for one game to last over 4 hours. This is what makes tennis unique!
3. Last week, I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head butt a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee signaledshowed a sign to a side referee to let an ambulance onto the field. Both of the players were put on the a stretcher and soon after they were transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a really very scary moment and everyone in the stadium werewas frightened. Everyone froze in fear. After the game, it was revealed that the two players only had minor concussions. Fortunately, soon after the game it turned out it was a small concussion for each of the players!
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In the picture there are 5 American football players and two other people. Two people, probably medics, are assisting one of the players who is lying on the field. If the player is seriously injured, he may not play in the next couple of games.
1. If the injury is serious, he will be taken to the hospital.
2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because big tournaments can last for over 4 hours. However, rarely, do games last that long.
3. Last week, I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head butt a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee signaled to a side referee to let an ambulance onto the field. The audience froze in fear. Both of the players were put onto stretchers and transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a very scary moment and everyone in the stadium was frightened. After the game, it was revealed that the two players only had minor concussions.
___________________ Cleaned it up a fair bit! a lot more could be written/edited. Good Luck!
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In the picture there are 5 American football players and two other people. Two people, probably medics, are assisting one of the players, who is lying on the pitch. The rest of the players took a knee as a courtesy gesture. The whole situation takes place on a sports field during a game of American football. If the player's injury is serious, he might not play in next couple of games.
1. The player will probably have to be taken to the hospital in an ambulance, if he cannot continue playing and the injury is serious. 2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because it is a case in big tournaments that some games last over 4 hours. It is a rare thing in sport for one game to last over 4 hours. This is what makes tennis unique! 3. Last week I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee showed a sign to a side referee to let an ambulance on the field. Both of the players were put on the stretcher and soon after they were transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a really scary moment and everyone in the stadium were frightened. Every one froze in fear. Fortunately soon after the game it turned out it was a small concussion for each of the players!
In the picture there are 5 American football players and two other people. Two people, probably medics, are assisting one of the players who is lying on the FIELD. The rest of the players took a knee as a courtesy gesture. (?? - THIS MAKES NO SENSE) The whole situation takes place on a sports field during a game of American football. (DELETE DUE TO REPETITION) If the
PLAYER IS SERIOUSLY INJURED, he MAY not play in THE next couple of games.
1. REWORDED > If the injury is serious, he will be taken to the hospital.
The player will probably have to be taken to the hospital in an ambulance, if he cannot continue playing and the injury is serious.
2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because big tournaments can last for over 4 ours.
it is a case in big tournaments that some games last over 4 hours. However, rarely, do games last that long. It is a rare thing in sport for one game to last over 4 hours. This is what makes tennis unique!
3. Last week, I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head butt a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee signaledshowed a sign to a side referee to let an ambulance onto the field. Both of the players were put on the a stretcher and soon after they were transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a really very scary moment and everyone in the stadium were was frightened. Everyone froze in fear. After the game, it was revealed that the two players only had minor concussions. Fortunately, soon after the game it turned out it was a small concussion for each of the players!
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With the italics deleted:
In the picture there are 5 American football players and two other people. Two people, probably medics, are assisting one of the players who is lying on the field. If the player is seriously injured, he may not play in the next couple of games.
1. If the injury is serious, he will be taken to the hospital.
2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because big tournaments can last for over 4 hours. However, rarely, do games last that long.
3. Last week, I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head butt a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee signaled to a side referee to let an ambulance onto the field. The audience froze in fear. Both of the players were put onto stretchers and transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a very scary moment and everyone in the stadium was frightened. After the game, it was revealed that the two players only had minor concussions.
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Cleaned it up a fair bit! a lot more could be written/edited.
Good Luck!
1. The player will probably have to be taken to the hospital in an ambulance, if he cannot continue playing and the injury is serious.
2. I like watching tennis on TV because I am always amazed by the technical precision of players. It is just mind-boggling how these players manage to put the ball exactly on the side or end line of a tennis court. In this sport you need to display endurance because it is a case in big tournaments that some games last over 4 hours. It is a rare thing in sport for one game to last over 4 hours. This is what makes tennis unique!
3. Last week I was at a football game of my local team. Everything was going well until suddenly, in 60th minute, two players tried to head a ball and they crashed into each other. Both of them immediately fell to the ground and were unresponsive. The main referee showed a sign to a side referee to let an ambulance on the field. Both of the players were put on the stretcher and soon after they were transported to the hospital for further evaluation. It was a really scary moment and everyone in the stadium were frightened. Every one froze in fear. Fortunately soon after the game it turned out it was a small concussion for each of the players!