Question

Wyraź swoje zdania na temat mojej osobistej wypowiedzi.
Pani z j. angielskiego zadała nam na następną lekcję pocztówkę do zrobienia.
Zrobiłam ją. Chciałabym usłyszeć wasze opinie na temat tego co napisałam.
W razie pomyłki proszę o pomoc :)

Hi Sandra
I’m writing to you form the district Tokio, Harajuku.
In the district is lots of clothes shops for girls.
I’m having a great time.
Throughout the week we visited Harajuku.
Every day we came back very late.
We got to the beautiful weather. All the time the sun was shining and it was warm.
I saw great clothes here.
I was in the store, which reportedly dressed Lady Gaga (no wonder).
Long watching these clothes, but I noticed a big candy store.
It was great.
I met a few interesting facts about this district.
Unfortunately, this is not what I wanted toured all, but I'm very happy.
It was fabulous.
Kisses, Agnes.

Answer 1

In the district there are lots of clothes shops for girls*
Every day we come back very late*
We have got beautiful weather*
The whole time the sun was shining and it was warm*
I was in a store*
I have been in a lot of stores and saw a lot of clothing*
I also saw a big candy store*
Unfortunately, I didn't see everything I wanted to see*
To takie moje zastrzeżenia :b (Urodziłam się w Ameryce i mieszkałam tam przez 9 lat x'D)