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Wyobraź sobie, że zrobiłeś zdjęcie korku. Napisz e-maila do gazety na temat problemu ruchu, które znasz.(Te problemy maja być o ekologii) PO ANGIELSKU.
Ma być w tym :
-opis sytuacij,
-przyczyny i rozwiązania,
- wniosek i zakończenie,
- muszą być w tekście użyte wyrazy : so i because.
-ma składać sie trzech części wstepu, rozwinięcia i zakończenia.
-(Tylko proszę nie kopiować z internetu ani nie przepisywać z niczego)
- na poziomie II gimnazjum
-długość taka jak w przykładzie około
Przykład tekst z książki:

I'm writing because I was at the beach with some friends last weekend and the amount of rubbish which we found there was unbelievable. This photo shows the bottles, cans and other rubbish which we found.

I think there are possibly two reasons for this. Firstly, people aren't responsible enough and they throw their rubbish away anywhere. Perhaps we need a few signs and people who patrol the beach. Also, there aren't enough bins on or near the beach, so I think we need more. Secondly, nobody cleans the beach. I think this is terrible in a tourist town. We need people to clean the beach and empaty the bins every day.

We must definitely do something about this situation. Maybe there ins't much rubbish in other places. I don't know, but we must do something here if we want a cleaner, more attractive beach.

Answer 1

I'm writting because Yesterday i was 4 hours late because of a hold-up! The photo shows how difficult is ride by car in our town.

I think, people must get out of the car and get on the bikes or even scooter. Our town should make cycle ways. Firstly, it will be bengin for our planet. And people will be healthier. I think the more tourist will be come to our town. 

We must do something with this! Residents of our town need this.

więc, tak. Pisałam to sama, więc sobie najlepiej jeszcze sprawdzić. Nie jest to tak długie jak książkowe, ale mam nadzieję, że pomoże.  

Answer 2

I'm writing because I saw a big traffic jam when I was coming back from school. It was unbelievable. This photo shows a long line of cars, which were practically not moving. 

 

I think there are possibly two reasons for this. Firstly, public transport in our city is really bad. Buses and trams are often late, so people use cars, because they don't want to be late for work or school. Vehicles are dirty, so it is not nice to go by them. Secondly, people often travel alone, so there are 40 cars and 40 people driving, while in one car 4 or 5 people could travel! Because of that we have waste of fuel and big pollution of the environment. 

 

We must definitely do something about this situation. Big traffic jams make our city dirty, polluted and noisy. I don't know, what to do, but this situation is dramatic. 

 

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Pozdrawiam. :)