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Learning at home versus at school What Is better choice to learn? Today I’m going to answer on this question. Nowadays more and more families decide to educate their children at home. What is the reason of this decision? We will see. Parents think that individual learning is better because them children are face to face with teacher. If parents want educate children at home, they must have a lot of time. Unfortunately at home parents are teacher. I think it is one of disadvantage in this learning. Second defect is very important. If children learn at home, they will have limited contact with peers. If parents prefer learning than connections, It will be great option of education for them. On other hand learning at school is better option for me. At school is better level of education, because parents have limited knowledge about concrete subject but teachers not. At school pupil have better contact with peers, he or she will establish new connections what can be useful in future. One of disadvantage learning at school is that it concecrate on share encyclopedic knowledge, but not practical. Schools very often don’t care of interest their pupils. Thank you.
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Learning at home versus at school What is a better way to learn? Today I’m going to answer this question. Nowadays more and more families decide to educate their children at home. What is the reason for this decision? We will see. Parents think that individual learning is better because their children are face to face with a teacher. If parents want to educate children at home, they must have a lot of time. Unfortunately at home parents are teachers. I think it is one disadvantage in this learning. Second defect is very important. If children learn at home, they will have limited contact with peers. If parents prefer learning than connections, it will be a great option of education for them. On the other hand learning at school is a better option for me. At school, there is a better level of education because parents have limited knowledge about concrete subjects but teachers have such knowledge. At school a pupil has better contact with peers, he or she will establish new connections what can be useful in future. One disadvantage of learning at school is that it focuses on an encyclopedic knowledge which is not practical. Schools don’t care about the interest of their pupils very often. Thank you.
What is a better way to learn? Today I’m going to answer this question.
Nowadays more and more families decide to educate their children at home. What is the reason for this decision? We will see.
Parents think that individual learning is better because their children are face to face with a teacher. If parents want to educate children at home, they must have a lot of time. Unfortunately at home parents are teachers. I think it is one disadvantage in this learning. Second defect is very important. If children learn at home, they will have limited contact with peers. If parents prefer learning than connections, it will be a great option of education for them.
On the other hand learning at school is a better option for me. At school, there is a better level of education because parents have limited knowledge about concrete subjects but teachers have such knowledge. At school a pupil has better contact with peers, he or she will establish new connections what can be useful in future. One disadvantage of learning at school is that it focuses on an encyclopedic knowledge which is not practical. Schools don’t care about the interest of their pupils very often. Thank you.