Witam musiałam napisać z angielskiego wypracowanie :)
"A holiday where everything went wrong."
Napisałam je sama, ale mam odwieczny problem z czasami -.- Więc proszę Was o sprawdzenie :) Nie śmiejscie się z błędów ;P Angielski nie jest moją mocną stroną ;P Oferuję za to 15 pkt ! ;)
Last year I went with my best friend on vacation to Gdańsk for two days. We just want to prove parents that we are responsible and mature and we wanted to have fun. I thought, it would be the best holiday in my life, but it wasnot..
Everything was going wrong. When we came, I realized that I forgot flip-flaps. I had to walk in sneakers, which was inconvenient, because it was very hot. Later we went to the beach, there were a lot of people. We couldnot find free space, after twenty minutes we finally could sunbathe. Few minutes later, I realized that I didnot take sun cream. I was really angry.
At night we went to the club. After a few drinks, a boy asked me to dance. He was very nice, but didnot know how to dance, everybody looked at us.
Later I went for a walk with my friend on the beach. I remembered that I left the bag in the club. Unfortunately I didnot find it.
The next day we packed up and went to train in the afternoon. In the hotel I left my favorite shirt, I was very sad. Accidentally we had boarded the wrong train and we went to Kołobrzeg. At night we came to home. When my mom saw me, she smiled and said "I see that the trip was successful." At home, I found that it was my funniest adventure.
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PROSZĘ SIĘ NIE ŚMIAĆ XD
1 linjka - we just wanted
2 linjijka prove to our parents
5 linijka - zamiast incovenient - uncomfortbale
6 linijka - there was a lot of people
7 linijka - i realised i hadnt taken
10 linijka - everybody was looking at us
11 linijka - i had left the bag
13 lnijka - i had left my favourite tshirt
14 linijka - zamiast boarded - got on
15 linijka - came home (bez to)