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It was last spring and I was the river with friends. Began to melt snow. There was wet and nasty, but the sunny day. With friends go fishing. I catch big fish. It attack me. My friends shoot fish. I didn't sleep all night, because I was afraid the fish to return.

Answer 1

I was by the river with my friends last spring. Snow began to melt. It was wet and nasty, but sunny. We went fishing. I caught a big fish. It attacked me. My friends shot it.  I didn't sleep all night, because I was afraid that the fish might return and attack me again.

Answer 2

It was last spring and I was by the river with my friends. The snow began to melt. It was wet and nasty, but the day was quite sunny. I went fishing with friends. I caught a big fish. It attacked me. My friends shot the fish. I didn't sleep all night, because I was afraid the fish could return.

 

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