Wiem że są wakacje ale czy ktoś mógłby sprawdzić mi ten wierszyk o wakacjach i poprawić błędy. z góry dzięki;)
In the holidays I was on a school trip In Kazimierz I sailed a ship Paulina and I spend a nice time does not fit here rime and in the holidays I visited grandmother where it was not my brother I read a book, ride on rolls, I listen music and went for a strolls It was cool but I must go to school
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In the holidays I was on a school trip In Kazimierz I sailed a ship Paulina and I spend a nice time does not fit here rime and in the holidays I visited grandmother where it was not my brother I read a book, ride on rolls, I listen music and went for a strolls It was cool but I must go to school
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On the holiday I was on a school trip In Kazimierz I sailed a ship Paulina and I spend a nice time does not fit here rime - niestety, ale tej linijki nie jestem pewna and on the holiday I visited grandmother my brother wasn't there -wiem, że się nie rymuje, ale jest dobrze I read a book, rode on rolls, I listened to music and went for a strolls It was cool but I must go to school
Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam, proszę o najjjj.... Z góry bardzo dziekuję. Pozdrawiam.
In Kazimierz I sailed a ship
Paulina and I spend a nice time
does not fit here rime
and in the holidays I visited grandmother
where it was not my brother
I read a book, ride on rolls,
I listen music and went for a strolls
It was cool
but I must go to school
POPRAWIONE NA:
On the holiday I was on a school trip
In Kazimierz I sailed a ship
Paulina and I spend a nice time
does not fit here rime - niestety, ale tej linijki nie jestem pewna
and on the holiday I visited grandmother
my brother wasn't there -wiem, że się nie rymuje, ale jest dobrze
I read a book, rode on rolls,
I listened to music and went for a strolls
It was cool
but I must go to school
Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam, proszę o najjjj.... Z góry bardzo dziekuję. Pozdrawiam.