Question

Czy może ktoś to gramatycznie poprawić? Bo nie wiem, czy dobrze jest napisane : /

We are in London. I have just returned from the city center. We were in the square and the intersections of the main streets in the West End. We saw Big Ben, the clock tower of London. Big Ben is the name of a bell weighing 14 tons mounted on top of the 106 meter high tower of the Palace of Westminster. We were at the London Eye, the world's largest panoramic wheel. View of the central London was beautiful. We saw the Tower Bridge, one of the most recognizable bridges in the world. We visited Buckingham Palace, the world's largest royal palace. Visiting London we saw a lot of sights. It was a fantastic day, would be such more.

Sincerely, Victoria and Alice.

Answer 1

 Big Ben is the name of a bell weighing 14 tons mounted on top of the 106 meter high tower of the Palace of Westminster. - ja bym tu napisała "the name of a bell THAT weighs 14 tons"

 Visiting London we saw a lot of sights. - chyba bardziej "While visiting London we saw a lot of wonderful sights. "

 It was a fantastic day, would be such more. - nie bardzo rozumiem, co chciałaś przez to powiedzieć ;)

   Sincerely, Victoria and Alice. - "Yours sincerely" powinno być.

 

i chyba tyle.