Question

Mógłby mi to ktoś sprawdzić, czy jest poprawnie gramatycznie i wgl czy składnie napisane :/ W załączniku, wiem że głupi temat :P Jak są błędy to opiszcie gdzie i jakie.

Z góry wielkie, wielkie dzięki!!

Answer 1

Troszke głupi temat ale w szystko jest w porządku tylko tam 2 lub 3 przecinków niemasz a reszta jest dobrze :)

Answer 2

At first, I’m going to decorate my room. Usually about 2 weeks before christmas eve I dress up  small xmas tree near the cupboard and put Santa's hat on the lamp. On 22nd of December my family is going on  a big shopping. I hate and love this at once! Because we usually spend about 5 hours in centre and stay in giantic queue. But after this we usually have some delicious food and cool stuff at home. Then me, my mum and my dad, we are cleaning the house. I don’t like it so much. But after that I can find many things quickly!

My dad buys christmas tree usually 3 or 4 hours before dinner. We decorate it usually in green and white lights and baubles. My parents are normally very stressed with making dishes and preparing the house, but always everything is ready on time. Dinner usually starts at 3 or 4 PM. On the table we have fish, salad, many dishes in tomatoe sauce and compote to drink. After dinner it is time for presents! I usually take my brother to another room, and say him that I must show him something, or he must help me, and then Santa Claus comes! When we are back all the presents are under the christmas tree. At nine or ten PM every members of family are going home and my parents are cleaning the kitchen. Next day we go to my grandma's house and have a second day of holiday. Then we only wait for the New Year.

Ogólnie spoko, ale często myliłaś czasy i zapominałaś o przedrostkach "a" "an" "the" itd. poza tym niezła praca, błędy, które zauważyłem są pogrubione, mam nadzieję, że pomogłem. I pamiętaj
-jeśli opowiadasz o zdarzeniu w present simple, nie zmieniaj go na past simple

- zawsze pisze się "I", nie "i"

-"a" "an" "the" SĄ BARDZO WAŻNE

osobiście postawiłbym ci 4= :p