Question

Tolong dikoreksikan apakah ada kata yang kurang tepat

Answer 1

1. udah bener
2. I want to become a successful man
3. I want to change Indonesia to a better place
4. udah bener
5. I want my friend to have happiness with me
6. I hope I can make my friend happy 

semoga membantu, maaf kalau ada yang salah :)

Answer 2

1. I want to be someone who never give up.
2. I hope that I will become a sucessful men.
3. I want/hope to change Indonesia for a better future.
4. *benar*
5. I want my friend(s) happy with me *atau* I want to make my friend(s) happy with  my.
6. I hope I can make my friend(s) happy