Tolong dikoreksi ya,mungkin direvisi boleh
I'll talking about my self
my name is Rima M Septilia
you can call me Rima
I was born on September 9 in probolinggo
I live at maron kidul
with my two parents and two brothes
my hobby is Reading,dancing,and singing
I have favorite singer,my favorite singer is Shreya Ghosal
I have a dream,I nt to be Lecturer
I will do anything to make my dream come true
I'll talking about my self
my name is Rima M Septilia
you can call me Rima
I was born on September 9 in probolinggo
I live at maron kidul
with my two parents and two brothes
my hobby is Reading,dancing,and singing
I have favorite singer,my favorite singer is Shreya Ghosal
I have a dream,I nt to be Lecturer
I will do anything to make my dream come true
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Kalau menurutku, ada beberapa kesalahan.1) Lebih tepat pakai I'll introduce myself
2) Sudah benar
3) Sudah benar
4) mungkin on nya diganti at dan September 9th
5) Pakainya in bukan at
6) Penulisannya brothers
7) sudah benar
8) sudah benar
9) nt diganti want
10) sudah benar
semoga membantu^^