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Tolong dibantu ya please banget. Saya ada lomba pidato dan naskah di kumpul hari ini.
Kalau ini bener gk ya?
Inggris : Now we already know about the visual effects. And to create it we need some software and combine it all. After Effects is one of the most manipulatinng software that released by Adobe System that is serves to give dynamic effect in a video. In it has provided a variety of effects that are very supported. Through after effects we can create a fire ball, an atmosphere like in beach, or crete a giant creature and it’s quite real. However, get a real visualization that require special expertise and balanced with a mature concept. For example, when I wanted to create a fireball, first I prepared a video that will be given effect. Then I create an object in after effects, and cut the object. Next, I give some effects that are available on the after-effects, such as cc particle or fast blur. And then add some other effects to make it look completely real.

Indonesia : Sekarang kita sudah tahu tentang visual effect. Dan untuk menciptakannya kita memerlukan beberapa software dan menyatukannya. After Effect adalah salah satu software keluaran perusahaan Adobe yang berfungsi memberi efek dinamis di dalam sebuah video. Di dalamnya telah tersedia berbagai efek yang sangat mendukung. Melalui After Effect kita mampu menciptakan sebuah bola api, ledakan atau sambaran petir yang benar benar nyata. Namun untuk mendapatkan visualisai itu memerlukan keahlian khusus serta diimbangi dengan konsep yang matang. Misalnya ketika saya ingin membuat sebuah bola api, pertama saya menyiapkan sebuah video yang akan diberikan efek. kemudian membuat sebuah objek di dalam after efek, lalu objek tersebut dipotong. Selanjutnya saya memberikan beberapa efek yang sudah tersedia di after efek, seperti cc particle atau fast blur. Dan berikutnya menambahkan efek efek lain agar terlihat benar benar nyata.

Answer 1

And to create it --> To create it,
And combine it all --> to combine it all
manipulatinng --> manipulating 
that is serves to give --> which has function to give (?)
In it has provided a variety of effects that are very supported diganti bentuk kalimatnya yak, kurang efektif kalau di inggris.
Through After Effects --> With After Effects
crete --> create
First I prepared a video that will be given effect. --> The first step I do is preparing a video which need effects to be enhanced.
And then add some other effects to make it look completely real. --> Then, I add some other effects to make it looks completely real. 

Answer 2

Now we HAVE already KNOWN about the visual effects. And to create it we need some software and combine it. After Effects is A software WHICH released by Adobe System, IT GIVES dynamic effect in a video. IT has provided a SUPPORTED EFFECTS varietIES.Through after effects, we can create QUITE REAL a fire ball, an atmosphere like in beach, or a giant creature. However, GETTING a real visualization REQUIRES special experIMENTS and a mature concept BALANCING. For example, when I WANT to create a fireball, first I prepare a video WHICH will be given effect. Then I create an object INTO after effect, and cut the object. Next, I give some effects WERE available on the after-effect, such as cc particle or fast blur. And then add some other effects to make it LOOKS completely real.