Question

Tolong di periksa jika ada kata kata yang salah... (terimakasih sebelumnya^_^)

Hi ma’am, how are you? I hope you are in the good condition. How was your holiday? Would you know about my holiday? Well I’m gonna tell you about my holiday. Last holiday, my family and I went to one of the beaches in banten, I forgot the name. but I told you the beach was so beautiful. i went there by car and when i got there i immedietly got out of the car and i walk toward the beach.

there I looked around by boat. the beach look so beautiful with the blue sea and clean sand. also, i tried banana boat with my father and my brother and it was so fun. after i played i'm not forgot to lunch and rested for a moment. i ate some seafood like fried shrimp and fish. after finish, my family and i ready to go home.

i was very happy because i could spent my holiday with my family.

Answer 1

Tidak ada yang salah,benar semua

Answer 2

Hi ma'am, how are you? I Hope you are in the good condition. How's your holiday? I wanna tell you about mine. My family and I went to one of the beaches in Banten, i was forgot what the name is. But i could tell you that the beach was so beautiful. We went there by car. when we are arrived, I'm just ran towards the beach, left my family behind.

We looked around the beach from the sea with boat. The beach was so beautiful with blue water and clean sand. I've tried banana boat too with my father and brother, and it was extreamely fun. After that, we took a rest for a moment and got lunch. I ate some seafood like fried shrimps and fish. After finish, we are ready to go home.

I was very happy because I could spent my holiday with my family.

maaf kalau ada yang diubah karena alesan keefektifan:)