Tolong buatin recount text tentang pengalaman yang merubah hidup (an experience that changed my life) min. 25 kalimat.
FionaCitra
Yesterday, when i was waiting for a taxi, i was so bored. Then, i saw a girl sat at a bench near the town dustbin. I saw her rummage the dustbin with a voracious stare at the putrid food in the dustbin. Then, she got her hand with a full of trash. I was wondering why she do that. Now, my mind is so confuse. My mind become more confused when she ate those trash in front of my eyes. I thought that she was starving. But i am still confuse why she won't go to the restaurant and eat dinner. But then i realize that she probably has no money to get a better food. So, i came near her and sat at the same bench she used to sat down. She was smirked on me, but she keep ate those junk. I offer her my sandwich, she accepted it and express her gratitude to me. I ask her why she did that to make me sure that she do that because she has no money. My hunch was right, she told me that she is starving and have no choice, but eat the trash. So, i give her some of my money and ask where are her home. She told me that she have no place to be called as home. I remember that i need someone to help me with the house work such as cooking or cleaning. So i offer her a job to be my maid in my house. She accepted and we go home together. Now i understand how difficult to find money for a people like her. She doing well her job as my maid. I can pay her enough and i can fulfill her needs. I thanks to god, because he already made me awake from my extravagant life. Now i understand that being an extravagant people is the biggest mistake ever that can deliver rich people became a poor people. So, i learn to save my money from that girl. I learn how to use my money when it's necessary only.
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alfiann13
Itu, verbnya yg harusnya jd verb2 msh verb1. trus yg "I thanks" jelas salah. Sorry, bukan maksud menggurui :))
FionaCitra
tidak apa-apa karena saya yang meminta anda untuk menunjukkan kesalahan saya....jadi, kalau recount semua verb harus jadi verb 2 ya ?
alfiann13
ya, gak semua sih... klo itu masih pas bagian menceritakan pengalamannya. trus di bagian kesimpulan "From now,..." nah baru pake v1 :)
FionaCitra
oh, bisa tolong beritahu kapan kita harus menambah s dalam verb ?
FionaCitra
seperti contoh ini "i plays football" berarti bermain sepak bola itu sedang berlagnsung atau sudah selesai/ bagaimana ?
alfiann13
tambahan s/es hanya untuk he, she, it. I, you, they, we persis spt v1. ingat, hal ini hanya berlaku utk simple present tense. jd yg betul "I play football" artinya "Saya sedang bermain sepakbola". klo blm jelas silakan tny ke mbah google atau guru terdekat :D
FionaCitra
kalau tanya ke mbah google masih masuk akal, kalau tanya ke guru, gak mungkin coz dia ditanyai malah nertawain, saya itu ingin sekali memukul wajah nya
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