Question

Tolong bantu memperbaiki qq.. kalau ada penulisan atau kata-kata yang kurang pas

secepatnya T.T

Answer 1

Gausah pake have pas gone wrong nya,gausah pake "clock" alarm aja udah cukup biar ga boros kata,ganti "asleep" jadi sleep aja,ganti aja jadi "woke me up" jangan call me to wake up

Answer 2

Last Tuesday was a terrible day. So many things had gone wrong. First I slept late because I studied hard for my exam until 12.00 a.m. I was tired when my alarm clock tinkled. I fell asleep again. So, my mom called me to woke up. the snooze made me came late to my school.
I ran to bathroom to took a bath, I usually pray after take a bath. Then, I was such in hurry till I choked my breakfast. After breakfast, I got dressed so quickly. 
Dad drove me to school by a car. I arrived at school on time, when the invigilator gave the examinees a piece of an exam paper. I walked slipped to my seat. Then, the invigilator looked angry with me.
When the exam was ongoing, I fell asleep. it made me to answered so quickly. I was afraid with my exam results. I hope I never have a day as the one I had Last Tuesday.