Question

Sprawdzi mi ktoś jakie błędy popełniłam?

My name's Madzia and I'm from Rzeszów in Poland . At the moment it;s half past four on Wednesday evening and i'm do your homework . My mum is reading a magazine and my dad is watching TV in livingroom . I usually listen to music at this time and then i sometimes watch a video and go to bed at nine o'clock . I don't like going to sleep because I'm never tired in the evening . On Saturday I get up at between nine o'clock and ten o'clock because I'm tired and I ofen have brekfast at half past eleven . I go to bed at eleven o'clock and read a magazine.

Answer 1

My name's Madzia and I'm from Rzeszówin Poland . At the moment it's half past four. It's Wednesday evening and i'm doing my homework . My mum is reading a magazine and my dad is watching TV in the livingroom . I usually listen to music at this time and I sometimes watch a video and then I go to bed . I don't like going to sleep because I'm never tired in the evening . On Saturday I get up later, because I'm tired after all week, I get up -- between nine o'clock and ten o'clock because I often have breakfast at half past eleven. I go to bed at eleven o'clock but before I usually read a magazine.

 

Lepiej brzmi tak składniowo ;)

to co dopisałam masz pogrubione, ale usunęłam też kilka przyimków i zaimków, które nie pasowały. Tak jest lepiej, bo po kolei wiadomo o co chodzi ;)