Question

SPRAWDZI KTOŚ POPRAWNOŚĆ GRAMATYCZNĄ TEGO TEKSTU? DZIĘKUJĘ!

On Saturday two weeks ago, I was in restaurant with my boyfriend. Tomek did surprise me because I had a birthday. I was really happy because I didn't know that my boyfriend is romantic. When we came to the place, I ordered my favourite dish: pancakes with chocolate. Waiter brought my meal after a few minutes. When i tired a pancakes turned out that there were the raw. I told my boyfrriend that I can't ate this dish because I felt so bad. I didn't say true becouse I didn't want to make him upset. We decided that we went to home. I didn't complain but i knew that I never go to this restaurant.

Answer 1

On Saturday two weeks ago, I was in a restaurant with my boyfriend. Tomek surprised me because it was my birthday. I was really happy because I didn't know that my boyfriend is so romantic. When we came into the restaurant I ordered my favourite dish: pancakes with chocolate. A waiter brought my meal after few minutes. When I tired the pancakes it turned out that there were raw. I told my boyfrriend that I was not going to eat this dish because I felt so badly.  I didn't say true because I didn't want to make him upset. We decided to go home. I didn't complain but I knew that I would never go to this restaurant.

Answer 2

On Saturday two weeks ago, I was in a restaurant with my boyfriend. Tomek surprised me because I had a birthday. I was really happy because I didn't know that my boyfriend was romantic. When we came to the place, I ordered my favourite dish: pancakes with chocolate. Waiter brought my meal after a few minutes. When I tasted the pancakes it turned out that they were raw. I told my boyfriend that I can't eat this dish because I felt so bad. I didn't say true because I didn't want to make him upset. We decided that we go to home. I didn't complain but i know that I will never go to this restaurant again.

Może mieć jeszcze jakieś małe błędy bo nauczycielem niestety nie jestem :<.