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Mark!
In monday morning I was shopping in jeweler.I was buying to earrings for my mother. When the seller was showing me this errings,suddenly the thief entered inside.He was tall and muscular. He had black hoodie and black trousers. He had masked,but I was seeing his green eyes. I was scared,because he took the gun behind hoodie.There were laying down. Next he approached to seller and commended to give him all many. The seller gave him all many. He was runing away.Luckily nobody got hurt's.
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Mark!
Monday morning I was shopping in a jewellery shop. I was about to buy earings for my mum and when the seller was showing them to me, suddenly the thief came inside. He was tall and mscular and he was wearing black hoodie and black trousers. His face was masked but I could see his green eyes. I was scared because he took the gun and pointed straight on us. Next he moved forward to the seller and demanded to give him money. The man gave him all and the thief ran away. Luckly nobody got hurt.