Question

Sprawdz czy nie ma bledow:

Sunday evening

Hi Peter,

Thank you for your letter. I'm glad you're fine. I'm sorry that I have not written for so long, but I have been very busy. You know what, I'm on holiday in Kolobrzeg! I'll be here for 3 days. The weather is great. It's very sunny and warm. I still can't believe that the weather is so great in here. I'm staying with my best friends: Anna and Katherine in a huge hotel near the sea. We have beautiful and very comfortable room with two bathrooms.

Generally, everything is fine and I'm very content. We usually get up on 8 o'clock. After that we go to the beach. I like swimm, but girls prefer sunbathing. We eat dinner on 3 p.m. (most often a vegetable and some meat). We come back to hotel, wash oneself and wear something comfortable. In the afternoon we go play volleyball or roller skating. We eat candys and icecreams. We meat new people.

Tomorrow we are going sightseeing round the town and surroundings. I never want back home, but my mum phone all the time and reminding me about this. I come for 4 days.

This is all for now, because I have to go for a dinner.

Lots of love

Joanna

Answer 1

1 BŁĄD - gdzie masz get up masz ,,on'' i jest źle bo powinno byc ,,at'' 8 o'clock

2 BŁĄD - I like swimm - powinno być swimming

 

Answer 2

Lepiej brzmi haven't niż have not.

At 8 o'clock !!

Swimming !!

Ice-creams, a nie icecream.

 

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