Sprawdźcie mi wypracowanie z angola, głównie pod względem gramatycznym i sensu wypowiedzi. Nauczycielka mówiła, aby wykorzystać 2 czasy przeszłe past simple i past continues.
It happened a few months ago. I was about 15 years old. I was in my last year of gymnasium school. I wasn’t having a good week, because I was sick. I was bored when I lay in bed. While I was surfing the internet I was seeing an interesting forum. It was a forum for computer graphics. I was amazed project posted by users this forum. I was interesting forum section of web design. I learned from users, how to make such projects. Since then, I started to create own projects. Of course, at the beginning I created a weak project, but after a while the positive comments were coming. Exercises constantly to be the best. I think this week in some way, changed my life
Według mnie napisałaś go bez błędnie.
Zecydowanie wydaje mi się że poprawnie jest napisane.
Są zastosowane 2 czasy więc nie ma problemu .