Question

sprawdźcie ,czy dobrze napisałam maila.

hi Hania,

I`m going on a cruis ,in the Baltic sea. I`m going to visit four cities: Stockholm,Helsinki, Copenchaga and St. Petersburg. I`m lookin forword to starting a cruise !

I will take with me ,a camera becouse I very like takeing photos.

The boat have many atraction.

I`m going to swimming pool and tenis.

i promise i `ll send you a postcard.

I miss for you anfd my familie.

Love.

Answer 1

Hi Hania,

I`m going on a cruise on the Baltic sea. I`m going to visit four cities: Stockholm, Helsinki, Copenhaga and St. Petersburg. I`m looking forward to setting off!

I will take my camera with me because I really like taking photos.

The boat has many attractions.

I`m going to go to the swimming pool and play tennis.

I promise I `ll send you a postcard.

I miss you and my family.

 

Love,

(podpis)

 

Tylko to zdanie "I miss you and my family" nie jest dla mnie jasne. Jeśli dopiero zamierzasz wyruszyć w podróż, to czemu tęsknisz za swoją rodziną? A może o co innego Ci chodziło? Możesz mi to napisać w wiadomości i wtedy Ci pomogę.