Question

Saturday is my favourite day. morning always eat appetising breakfast. In the afternoon I usually meet my friends and drive a bike or to play football. My colleague Adrian often comes around and we play computer games or we watch TV. Then I surf the and chat with my friends online before I go to bed at 11 o'clock. saturday are fun!

Mógł bym prosić o poprawę tego? czy jest dobrze napisane?

Answer 1

My favourite day is sutarday. I always eat appetising brakfast on mornings. I usually meet with my friends, I ride a bike and play football. My friend Adrian often goes around (dookoła czego chodzi?), we play computer games and we watch TV. Then I surf on internet and I chat with my friends online. I go to bed at 11 o'clock (może być też "pm.").
I love sutarday! / Sutarday is nice/super!

Masa błędów. Poćwicz troszkę czas Present Simple oraz kolejność wstawiania wyrazów częstotliwości i oczywiście troszkę słówek wkuj, bo w Google Translate nic dobrze nie przetłumaczysz ;p c;