Question

Czy dobrze napisałam ten list?

Hello!

I can't waiting when you will come.I think that this student exchange program is very cool.

When you will come?I very want to know you.

I already have planned.When you will come,we will go to museum in my town.It's very interesting. Also,we'll go to the local lake.I hope that you can swim.

Can you bring with you any thing from your country?I want to know your culture.

Unfortunately I must go. I'm waiting for your answer.

Lot of kisses,xyz.

wiem,mało rozbudowane,ale miało być od 50-100słów,a tu jest już 90 ;/ rozpisałabym się bardziej,ale pani obniża ocenę nawet jakby było 101 słów.

Czy to jest dobrze?

Answer 1

mogłabyś zastosowac np. ''I'm going to take you ...'' czyli mam zamiar zabrać cię. Możesz też napisać że jest słonecznie czy cos w tym stylu, że to idealna pogoda np na wypad nad jezioro ;) żebys miała tego trochę więcej. Tyle od mnie ;)

Answer 2

I can't wait until you come.

 

When will you come? I'd like to meet you very much.

 

I have already planned what we are going to do.

 

Could you bring anything from your country with you? It would be happy I saw something describing your culture.

 

I think that's all, I am waiting for your answer. (to zamiast ostatniego zdania, tak będzie lepiej brzmeieć)

 

Lots of kisses, XYZ