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It was very dark and scary night. Far, far In small town without any people, was very big hill. And in is hill was scaty huge and it moves very very quietly. Don't think, that you are brave! Any children who was come there hasn't back.
NAPRAWDĘ BARDZO DLA MNIE WAŻNE!
Far away in a small and empty town there was a big hill. The legend said that the hill was very strange but nobody knew why. Yesterday, it turned out that the hill had started to move. It hadn't made any noise but but the citizens noticed it. People were very excited about it and children could't wait to go there. Their parents warned them not to go there, but there was a very brave one who decided to see it on his own. He went to the hill and disappeared. The second person who decided to go was his best friend. He thought he had to find his friend. It was a very dark and terriblly scary night. He took a lot of weapon to fight an aliens as people believed there were some aliens on the hill. The boy was very terrified but whe wanted to solve the mistery. He was going along a meadow when suddenly he heard a strange noise. He stopped for a while then continued his journey. When he arrived at the top he was tired but relieved. It turned out that that his friend decided to stay with some Indians who camped there.