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Treść zadania:
Write a formal letter making a reservation of 120 - 150 words. Include this information:
- the dates of your stay and the numer of guests/rooms
- correct some information you gave on the phone, e.g. one friend is a vegetarian (and the hotel needs to know this)
- request a brochure or leaflet, if the hotel has one
- make an additional request or instruction
Zadanie pochodzi z podręcznika Matura Solutions, z wydawnictwa Oxford, poziom B1, B2 (fioletowo - purpurowy) autorzy Tim Falla, Paul A. Davies.
Oto, co napisałem:
Dear Ms Watherby
Further to our recsent telephone conversation, I am writing, bacause I wish to make a reservation for two weeks from 5 to 19 September. There will be sixteen people in our party. I want to reserve four rooms, for four people each. I would be very satisfied if you could give us rooms on the top floor.
My friend is a vegetarian and he needs to eat meals wihout any kind of meat (include fish).
I wish to have a brochure or leaflet if it is possible.
All people from my party want to have air conditioned rooms with TV, radio and fridge with minibar.
I look forward to hearing you in due course.
Yours sincerly
(Mój podpis)
Treść zadania:
Write a formal letter making a reservation of 120 - 150 words. Include this information:
- the dates of your stay and the numer of guests/rooms
- correct some information you gave on the phone, e.g. one friend is a vegetarian (and the hotel needs to know this)
- request a brochure or leaflet, if the hotel has one
- make an additional request or instruction
Zadanie pochodzi z podręcznika Matura Solutions, z wydawnictwa Oxford, poziom B1, B2 (fioletowo - purpurowy) autorzy Tim Falla, Paul A. Davies.
Oto, co napisałem:
Dear Ms Watherby
Further to our recsent telephone conversation, I am writing, bacause I wish to make a reservation for two weeks from 5 to 19 September. There will be sixteen people in our party. I want to reserve four rooms, for four people each. I would be very satisfied if you could give us rooms on the top floor.
My friend is a vegetarian and he needs to eat meals wihout any kind of meat (include fish).
I wish to have a brochure or leaflet if it is possible.
All people from my party want to have air conditioned rooms with TV, radio and fridge with minibar.
I look forward to hearing you in due course.
Yours sincerly
(Mój podpis)
Według mnie, praktycznie wszystko jest bardzo dobrze napisane, tylko 1 literówka na końcu (Yours sincerely ;)) i zapomniałeś raz o przyimku:
After our recent telephone conversation, I write this, because I wish to make a reservation for two weeks from 5 to 19 September. There will be sixteen people in our party. I want to reserve four rooms, for four people in each. I would be very satisfied if you could give us rooms on the top floor.
My friend is a vegetarian and he needs to eat meals wihout any kind of meat (include fish).
I wish to have a brochure or a leaflet if it is possible.
All people from my party want to have air conditioned rooms with TV, radio and fridge with minibar.
I look forward to hearing you in due course.
Yours sincerely
(Mój podpis)