Read the paragraph. Then rewrite the paragraph, using time-order transition words :
Let me tell you about my trip. I flew from New York to London. It was very interesting, and I spent two days there. I took the train through the Chunnel to Paris. Paris was amazing. I got a car and drove to Rome. It was a long drive, but it was really scenic. I took a boat to the island of Sardinia. It was very beautiful. I flew back to London and back home to New York.
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Let me tell you about my trip, first I flew form New York to London; it was very interesting, and I spent two days there. Then I took the train through the Chunnel to Paris. Believe, Paris was amazing! Later I got a car and drove to Rome, actually it was a long drive, but it was really scenic. After I took a boat to the island of Sardina, It was very beautiful! And finally I flew back to London and back home to New York.