Prosze o sprawdzenie czy praca generalnie jest napisana dobrze i poprawienie bledow.praca jest o jednym z moich wakacyjnych dni i pisana jest w czasie przeszlym.napisalem ja i iteresuje czy mogę tak często używać zwrotu I.
in my special holidays day I woke up at 4am. I went in the bathroom washed face, eyes and teeth. I wore trousers, sweatshirt and shoes. I was hungry so I made breakfast. I quickly ate. I went in the outside and I went fished. In place I was at 6am . I caught two big fish and returned home at 11 o'clock. I changed clothes and I started ate dinner. Then I watched TV and relaxed. I checked mail, and played in the computer games. Later I went to my friends played football and talk about the evening party. I went back to home at 16 o'clock. I took a bath and I ate diner. I cleaned home. Then I went to my friend Michal and we went on party. It was great, we danced and laughed. I came home at 11 and I went sleep in the bed.
It's my crazy holidays ;)
Dobrze ;)
jest dobrze.. a to ze powtarzasz to nic...C;
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